So here are a couple of ideas (separated by gaps) for a new song I want to make. I want to focus in on how it sounds before I spend time composing.

Things I'm looking at: Mastering, Melody, Rhythm. I want to know things like: will I need more elements (+ how many, what frequency ranges, whatever else)? Do the elements and patterns I have need work (better defined freq-ranges, too much reverb?, volume levels)?

I'm asking advice about short clips because I'm still thinking about sound design, and fitting them together, how many do I need...the same old same old.

Please be specific.

Criticize the heck out of it.

http://www.mediafire.com/?eq72mknz9rg